A Book I'm Writing!! Yeah!

So.I want to be an artist and a author. I am in the making of a book in which I have not titled. It is about this kid named Hayden Smith. He meats this weird kid at school who had moved there two years ago. He had no friends. Hayden had a lot of friends and the got mad at him for something that I haven't figured out yet. So he said what the hey? The kids name was Elie, (yes, I know thats a girlish name.It just fit! (no,he's not girly!)) and he said he wasn't like other kids. Hayden thought he was some kind of weirdo that kept reading those twilight series.(HA) It turns out that this kid was not from our world and he was a Changer. What's a Changer you ask? Well I will just tell you! Its a person that can change into ANY animal. When I say any, I mean real,real animals. (Not like werewolves,vampires,centaurs,blah,blah) Anyway, Elie took Hayden to a world in which he came from called Rache.(sounds like rock) Elie, who is the last Changer and he is being hunt down by HF's (Haveran followers), has a friend who is helping him along the way. Her name is Jewel Anne Maverics. She was accused for hiding him,in which she did, so they are both being tracked down to kill. They have a lot of other characters they met along the way,some they already knew. For example, Flint. He's known Jewel since she was 3 and he's a werewolf. He got bit by his dad when he was 7 and is 21 present in this book. Personally, he's my favorite character so far. I've probably not put half of this in readable words so yeah. I'm trying not to sound it like the new Harry Potter so yeah. Post your comments on how you think it sounds and all and thanks for taking your time to read this. Peace out hommies!